well, thats done

now for the sacraficing of lambs, goat and bunnies.

5,000 words. much imput from BOTH parental units (who can't even talk to each other!)

my dad says its a fine damn story.
my mom says its wonderful.

*I* say that i will be holding a sacraficial BBQ, in the hopes that the Muses will pay attention to my story and have it accepted!

(but hey, for the first time, i FINISHED something longer than a poem!)